User blog comment:Jyggalag Daedric Prince of Order/Drag me to Purgatory/@comment-25358468-20130415190643

Benny stopped drinking and tore its head clean off.

Should be something like:

Benny lifted his head, blood covering his face, and knelt down. Picking up his weapon, he gripped it tight and swung it forward, making a straight line in the Chimera's neck. It's head swung right off, making a thud as it hit the ground.

Otherwise, your story sounds pretty epic. :)