User blog comment:Jyggalag Daedric Prince of Order/Drag me to Purgatory/@comment-4544974-20130415220838

This is great, Kessler. :) I really like it. One thing that can make it even better is if you use more description. (I know, Gurgatory has said this to you already but, don't worry, keep practicing your writing.) This story has a ton of great potential. :)